~Genre, Believable near future sci fi.
-Golden Fleece, an artifact of really advanced or unknown tech (could be alien tech). Little known about it but seems to have miraculously beneficial effects on human health.
-Jason, promising entrepreneur.
-Media, a charismatic political and spiritual leader of a very successful colony located in Neptune's moon Triton.
-Pelias, an established businessman associated with a powerful corporation.
-Gods, members of the management board of that corporation.
-Phineas, member of a previous unsuccessful expedition to find the Fleece.
In this version Pelias is told by the members of the board of the corporation about the importance of finding the artifact and bringing it back for research. He is also told they are thinking of associating with Jason, a young independent entrepreneur, to create an expedition to find the artifact.
Pelias is trying to make merits to be considered as a member of the board. He feels his ambitions can be threatened by Jason so he proposes taking charge of the project representing the corporation.
Good start on the architectural forms. Could explore more iconic shapes for potential landmarks too. Right now, I see that you are mainly using the darker value for windows and cavities. I would suggest that you work with a medium dark gray to think about rough form render (light and shadow) as well, that would push you to resolve the forms further.
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